I will advise for you. Please make your effort in your blog.
Writing Ⅳattendance is TypingSpeedTrial. If your TypingSpeedTrial will late, you are counted for absence. You have to type the word very quickly. I think you need practice typing very hard. And you have to go to the class room before starting the class. You need start-up your computer quickly. Teacher is stern.
Put some photographs in your blog. Your blog will be cute. So many visitor will visit your blog.
I think writing blog is needed many things. Ofcourse, you write your diary, and you have to write some reviews(movie, music...) You have to check instructor's blog every week. There are some important suggestions.
I hope you enjoy writing blog.
(123 words)
2008-01-30
2008-01-29
Movie★2
I introduce my recommend movie. My recommend movie is "The Sound Of Music". It is a musical film. It is very famous movie. It was made in 1964. It was made in America. A lot of famous songs come out in this movie. There are Do-Re-Mi, The Sound of Music, Edelweiss in it. I think that everyone have heard these songs once. I watched it when I was a high school student. It is so old movie, but story is interesting, and I like this songs. Please watch it.
(89 words)
Movie
I want to watch this movie now. This name is "陰日向に咲く". It was written by Gekidan Hitori. He is a laughter entertainer. But he is versatile. He writes a novel, he performs in a drama. I like Aoi Miyazaki. She appears for this movie. She acts very well. She is very cute. I watched most of the movies which she appered in. I will watch this movie next month.
(71 words)
2008-01-23
2008-01-21
Okinawa☆★4
Okinawa☆★3
Okinawa☆★2
I went to 'Cyura Umi Aquarium". It is so big aquarium. There are many fishes. For example, there are big whale shark(upper the photograph), and sea turtle(lower photo). It was so beautiful.
I had a good time in there.
(39 words)
Okinawa☆★
I went to Okinawa last week. I went to there with my mother and my aunt. I stayed in there for 4 days. The purpose that we went to there for is a visit of the uncle. He lives in Okinawa with his family.
Okinawa was hot!!I love Okinawa, because there are a lot of delicious food. And, there are beautiful ocean, sky view.:*゚..:。:.(´+・ω・人・ω・+`).:*゚:.。:。
Okinawa was hot!!I love Okinawa, because there are a lot of delicious food. And, there are beautiful ocean, sky view.:*゚..:。:.(´+・ω・人・ω・+`).:*゚:.。:。
(37 words)
2008-01-16
Trip to Okinawa
Tomorrow, I will go to Okinawa for travel!!(〃・ω・〃)ノ~☆・゜+。*゜・.+☆
I want to go to Duty Free Shop. It was opened last year. There are many high brand shop!! I want to buy bags, wallet, key-case... I am looking for to go there. But weather forecast says it will be cloudy in Okinawa. I wish It will be fine. I will uproad Okinawa's photos next time .:*゚..:。:ヽ(○´3`)ノ.:*゚..:。:
(95 words)
I want to go to Duty Free Shop. It was opened last year. There are many high brand shop!! I want to buy bags, wallet, key-case... I am looking for to go there. But weather forecast says it will be cloudy in Okinawa. I wish It will be fine. I will uproad Okinawa's photos next time .:*゚..:。:ヽ(○´3`)ノ.:*゚..:。:
(95 words)
Coming of age ceremony
★January 13th ★
The day was a coming-of-age day.:*゚..:。:ヽ(○´3`)ノ.:*゚..:。:. I came back to my home prefecture Oita. I went to Oita castle, because there were ceremony. I wear pink Furisode. Almost everyone wear the Furisode. It is Japanese traditional. Actually, I wanted to wear Black Furisode. But my sister bought pink Kimono.。・゚・(*ノД`*)・゚・。 If there is a chance in a kimono next time, I want to wear black imono.
The day was a coming-of-age day.:*゚..:。:ヽ(○´3`)ノ.:*゚..:。:. I came back to my home prefecture Oita. I went to Oita castle, because there were ceremony. I wear pink Furisode. Almost everyone wear the Furisode. It is Japanese traditional. Actually, I wanted to wear Black Furisode. But my sister bought pink Kimono.。・゚・(*ノД`*)・゚・。 If there is a chance in a kimono next time, I want to wear black imono.
I met many old friends. I enjoyed the day very much.
(103 words)
Typing
Typing is important for writing. In this class, we use blog. We have to write own blog. I must type in the computer very quickly. But I am poor at typing. So I have to practice typing. In holyday, I practiced typing in Internet. I practiced in Sushi-da. It is very useful site. In spring vacation, I will practice typing.
(62 words)
(62 words)
2008-01-11
Book Review 2-18★Harry Potter★
I read "Harry Potter and the Sorcerers Stone". I have read this book in Japanese before.
Main character is Harry Potter. He is an orphan. His parents were killed by Voldemort. His parents were witch. So He cans use magic. And when he is 11 years old, he was invited to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. It is famous witch school. He make many friends in there. They spend severe study and the days of ascetic practices to become an excellent magician.
It is very famous book. I want to this Harry Potter series books in English.
(98 words)
Book Review 2-17★Dracula★
In the mountains of Transylvania there stands a castle. It is the home of Count Dracula. It is dark, lonely place, and at night the wolves howl around the walls. In the spring of 1875, Jonathan Harker travels to Transylvania, on a business visit to the home of Count Dracura. Jonathan does not really want to go because in a few month’s time he is getting married to his beautiful Mina, and he’s does not want to leave her. It is little horror story. I felt scary.
(87 words)
(87 words)
2008-01-09
Writing Ⅳc: Portfolio
Writing IVc: Portfolio
(See: Note 1, below)
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, and Words
(See: Note 2, below.) Months | 08 | 09 | 10 | 11 | 12 | 01 | Totals | fn | Indices |
Book reviews | 0 | 0 | 4 | 6 | 2 | 6 | 18 | 18/18*.2 | |
Blog posts | 0 | 0 | 19 | 32 | 18 | 22 | 91 | 91/90*.2 | |
Words | 0 | 0 | 2587 | 4395 | 2810 | 1602 | 11332 | 11332/7500*.2 | |
TOTAL | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- |
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below) 1.1. Showcase | Short titles [+ links] | Dates yy.mm.dd | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M | Notes |
Mega- essay 07.10.12 | Mega essay | 2007.10.17 | 12 | 1594 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
Favorite place(-s) 07.10.26 | Favorite place | 2007.11.14 | 4 | 368 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
Movie review 07.11.11 | Movie review | 2007.11.09 | 4 | 355 | 3 | 1 | 1 | 0 | |
Community life 07.11.25 | Community life | 2007.11,21 | 4 | 510 | 0 | 1 | 2 | 0 | |
TV in Japan 07.12.09 | TV in Japan | 2007.12.07 | 5 | 480 | 0 | 2 | 2 | 0 | |
Learning w/ computers 07.12.21 | Learning with comoputers | 2007.12.21 | 5 | 357 | 0 | 2 | 0 | 0 | |
Totals | --- | --- | 3664 | 3 | 6 | 5 | 0 | --- |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included
M: number of other media included
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- I think "TV in Japan" is the best. Because I studied television in long time to write this essay. I was able to know about TV. TV has good influence and bad influence. TV is very important for us, but we have to know TV's bad influence.
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd) | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | Writing Studio Blog | 2007.12.11 | 38 words | I had to write better comment. |
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | ||||
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | Movie review | 2007.11.09 | 28 words | She asked about my essay. I think it is good thing. |
2.4. Most comments on: | Movie review | 2007.11.09 | 57 words | I wanted you to write better comment. |
2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | Community life | 2007.12.05 | 18 words | Thank you. |
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | --- | |
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | ||
2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | New cell phone | 2007.07.25 | 28 words | Thank you. |
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | --- | |
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | ||
* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?- ... No. I didn't know how to display recent comment in a sidebar.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- I couldn't comment on peer's blog. I think I had to comment on a lot of peers.
3.0. Typing Speed Trials
Showcase | Numbers of words | Dates (yy.mm.dd) |
3.1. Worst typing speed trial* | 65 | 2007.10.05 |
3.2. Best typing speed trial* | 110 | 2007.11.21 |
3.3. Improvement (best minus worst) | 55 | --- |
3.4. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials** | 90 | |
* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.
4.0. Book Reviews
4.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | Words | Comments |
Example: | Vampire Killer | 07.05.16 | 39 | 1 |
2-01 | Book review 2-01 | 2007.10.05 | 58 | 0 |
2-02 | Book review 2-02 | 2007.10.05 | 38 | 0 |
2-03 | Book review 2-03 | 2007.10.05 | 75 | 0 |
2-04 | Book review 2-04 | 2007.10.05 | 52 | 0 |
2-05 | Diana | 2007.11.29 | 166 | 0 |
2-06 | Titanic | 2007.11.29 | 377 | 0 |
2-07 | The railway children | 2007.11.29 | 62 | 0 |
2-08 | Washington D.C. | 2007.11.30 | 213 | 0 |
2-09 | London | 2007.11.30 | 243 | 0 |
2-10 | Animal in danger | 2007.11.30 | 228 | 0 |
2-11 | Mike's lucky day | 2007.12.04 | 207 | 0 |
2-12 | Prince William | 2007.12.04 | 340 | 0 |
2-13 | Kings and Queens | 2008.01.08 | 80 | 0 |
2-14 | Let's play tennis | 2008.01.08 | 63 | 0 |
2-15 | David Beckham | 2008.01.08 | 175 | 0 |
2-16 | Jeniffer Lopez | 2008.01.08 | 283 | 0 |
2-17 | Dracula | 2008.01.11 | 87 | 0 |
2-18 | Harry Potter | 2008.01.11 | 98 | 0 |
--- | --- | TOTALS: | 2884 | 0 |
4.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- I think "Prince William" is the best. Because this book is my favorite, and there are many words. I could know about Prince William in this book. I did not know at all him in the past to read this book. So I became like him.
5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
Showcase | Yes | No |
5.1. Does your blog have an archive? | yes | |
5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | yes | |
5.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | yes | |
5.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | yes | |
5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | yes | |
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
| yes | |
| yes | |
| yes | |
| yes | |
| yes | |
5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | yes | |
| --- | --- |
| --- | --- |
5.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics? | yes | |
| yes | |
| --- | --- |
5.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | yes | |
| --- | --- |
5.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | ||
| --- | --- |
| --- | --- |
5.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.- ...I wrote this blog in easy English.
- ...I included some pictures in this blog.
- ...I introduced some movies in this blog.
6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing
- ...In this semester, writing blog was interesting for me. I was able to introduce a lot of things. And I could know my classmate's diary. It was so useful. I enjoyed writting the blog. But I did not comment on the blog of the my friends. I had to comment them.
7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors
- ...Please enjoy that you write blog. If you include some pictures in the blog, it will be so interesting. And If you continue writing blog, your writing skill will be better. Please practice typing. This class use computer. You must type quickly in computer. Please comment on the blog of a lot of your friends. please communicate with a lot of people on the blog. I hope you enjoy to write a blog!!
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Notes:
- This portfolio template amplifies the template for Writing IIIc portfolios.
- The overview section (0.0. Overview, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-01.
- This essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02.
2008-01-08
Book review2-16★Jeniffer Lopez
I like Jeniffer Lopez very much. So I choose this book.
Her movies are on TV. Her music is on the radio. She is a Hollywood star and successful singer. Today, she is the number one Latin actress in the United States. She is not only beautiful. She is interesting, too. She went to the Holy Family Catholic School in New York. It is a good school and she is good student. The school years go quickly. Jennifer is not a little girl now. She goes to her dance school every day. She works well. Then she starts to look far a job. It is 1988. there were many good dancers in New York. They were all looking for work, but there aren’t many jobs. She is wrong. The theater show, Golden Musicals of Broadway, wants dancers. She goes for an audition and gets a job. The show goes to Europe. Then, after five months, she starts a job with a new show, Synchronicity. This shows goes to Japan.
She is a very good dancer now. And she is beautiful, too. She is fan. And she is Latin. She gets some interesting work in music. She dances on the music video of famous singers, and she meets important people in the music business.
“ I am always going to be Latina. That is me.”
Jeniffer’s success is good for Latin Americans. She knows that. Before the 1990s, “Latin” was about people with little money and life. In music and in movies, Latin performers are suddenly very popular. Julio Iglesias, Ricky Martin, and Marc Anthony are all big names. And now there are women, too. And who is number one? Jennifer Lopez, of course.
(283 words)
Her movies are on TV. Her music is on the radio. She is a Hollywood star and successful singer. Today, she is the number one Latin actress in the United States. She is not only beautiful. She is interesting, too. She went to the Holy Family Catholic School in New York. It is a good school and she is good student. The school years go quickly. Jennifer is not a little girl now. She goes to her dance school every day. She works well. Then she starts to look far a job. It is 1988. there were many good dancers in New York. They were all looking for work, but there aren’t many jobs. She is wrong. The theater show, Golden Musicals of Broadway, wants dancers. She goes for an audition and gets a job. The show goes to Europe. Then, after five months, she starts a job with a new show, Synchronicity. This shows goes to Japan.
She is a very good dancer now. And she is beautiful, too. She is fan. And she is Latin. She gets some interesting work in music. She dances on the music video of famous singers, and she meets important people in the music business.
“ I am always going to be Latina. That is me.”
Jeniffer’s success is good for Latin Americans. She knows that. Before the 1990s, “Latin” was about people with little money and life. In music and in movies, Latin performers are suddenly very popular. Julio Iglesias, Ricky Martin, and Marc Anthony are all big names. And now there are women, too. And who is number one? Jennifer Lopez, of course.
(283 words)
Book review2-15★David Beckham
I read “ David Beckham”. Do you know him?? I think most people know him.
He is captain of England and famous for his Number 7 shirt at Manchester United , is now playing for Real Madrid.
In 1975, David Beckham came into the world in Leytonstone, in London. His parents were big foot ball fans. Every Christmas little David had a new football and a new football shirts from his father. It was always a Manchester United shirt. The family lived in London, but his father was a very big fan of “the reds”. David wasn’t very good at school. Schoolwork wasn’t interesting or important to him. But he liked playing football. He played with a ball every weekend and every evening after school. His father was good teacher for him. David was small and shin. But his legs were strong. He did long kicks and short kicks, again and again every day. When he was 16, he was a boy player for Manchester United. He became good football player.
(175 words)
He is captain of England and famous for his Number 7 shirt at Manchester United , is now playing for Real Madrid.
In 1975, David Beckham came into the world in Leytonstone, in London. His parents were big foot ball fans. Every Christmas little David had a new football and a new football shirts from his father. It was always a Manchester United shirt. The family lived in London, but his father was a very big fan of “the reds”. David wasn’t very good at school. Schoolwork wasn’t interesting or important to him. But he liked playing football. He played with a ball every weekend and every evening after school. His father was good teacher for him. David was small and shin. But his legs were strong. He did long kicks and short kicks, again and again every day. When he was 16, he was a boy player for Manchester United. He became good football player.
(175 words)
Book review2-14★Let's play tennis
I read “Let’s play tennis”.
Meg and her friends are learning how to play tennis. Tennis is very famous sports, and many people play tennis. I had never played tennis. But I want to play tennis when I read this book. This book is written in easy English. And there are many pictures.
Join them to find out all about this exciting sports!!
(63 words)
Meg and her friends are learning how to play tennis. Tennis is very famous sports, and many people play tennis. I had never played tennis. But I want to play tennis when I read this book. This book is written in easy English. And there are many pictures.
Join them to find out all about this exciting sports!!
(63 words)
Book review★Kings and Queens
I read "Kings and Queens". This is the story of Boudicca, Alfred, Henry VIII and many other kings and queens,some great, some not to great.
I introduce about Elizabeth I. The young elizabeth had a very difficult time. Her father is King Henry VIII. He killed her mother. Elizabeth was queen of England and Wales for forty-five years, but she had no husband and no children. amost people liked her then. Today, many people think she was england's best queen.
(80 words)
I introduce about Elizabeth I. The young elizabeth had a very difficult time. Her father is King Henry VIII. He killed her mother. Elizabeth was queen of England and Wales for forty-five years, but she had no husband and no children. amost people liked her then. Today, many people think she was england's best queen.
(80 words)
2008-01-07
Fukuoka
★January 2nd★
I went to Fukuoka with my mother on January 2nd. It is the day when a sale begins on that day. I was looking forward to coming the day. We went to there by car. It was crowded very much. We went to "Mitsukoshi", "Iwataya", "Tenjin Kore", and so on. All departments crowded with people. I bought many clothes. My mother bought full-house bonus. The name is "Fukubukuro" in Japanese. I like shopping very much. So the day was interesting for me. However I spent too much money. I don't have money now。・゚・(*ノД`*)・゚・。 I have to work very much...
I went to Fukuoka with my mother on January 2nd. It is the day when a sale begins on that day. I was looking forward to coming the day. We went to there by car. It was crowded very much. We went to "Mitsukoshi", "Iwataya", "Tenjin Kore", and so on. All departments crowded with people. I bought many clothes. My mother bought full-house bonus. The name is "Fukubukuro" in Japanese. I like shopping very much. So the day was interesting for me. However I spent too much money. I don't have money now。・゚・(*ノД`*)・゚・。 I have to work very much...
monjya
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